The 1st draft is titled "Pretty Boys/ Pretty Girls: Revenge of the Dormers". This 2nd draft is titled "Pretty Girls In Trouble 176 pp".
Three boys (Cris, jonah, Ricki) saw a crime in Brooklyn, New York. To protect the 3 boys, their parents decided to place them in a private college in San Francisco, California.
The 3 boys found out that the private college turns out to be an exclusive school for girls.
The 3 boys decide to disguise as girls to survive dorm and college life.
They were befriended by a dormer, Carla, who thought they were girls. Carla invites the three "girls" to a pool party and yacht party.
Meanwhile, Carla cannot get along with Gloria, the president of the Student Council.
The conflict between Carla and Gloria led to the involvement of the three "girls" (Cris, Jonah, Ricki) with disastrous comic result.
The killer from Brooklyn goes to San Francisco after he sees Cris in the news on TV.
The killer finds the 3 boys and kills them. Miraculously, the 3 boys survive.